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    I see so much pain,

    though happiness shines,

    the hardships, they shine brighter.


    As we cling to what pleases us,

    we come to what ceases us... resolution?

    where's my solution.


    Escape route,

    no way out,

    its more then just me,

    responsibility,

    how id love to be free,

    to **** off my life,

    but i cant,

    and i wont,

    so i will not,

    and im still not,

    at peace,

    yet im closer,

    cuz im trying,

    instead of dying,

    day by day.
    "Life is a run. In attack we run, in defense we run. When you can no longer run, time to die" - Shichiroji "Seven samurai"

  • #2
    cool......
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    • #3
      nice!......

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      • #4
        *finger snaps*

        "What is barely legal?" - Ali G

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        • #5
          guess the initial participation plan didn't really work out for you

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          • #6
            it's better to have a comp...like the one plimflower did with this type of thing. I remember Master Splinter's poems where really good then as well.
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            • #7
              hmm gonna have to do a look up about them, guess they would all still be in the rubber room

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              • #8
                You can live, or you can die,

                You can laugh or you can cry.

                You can give or you can take,

                make the choice, its your mistake.

                If i can live in harmony, and i could die so peacefully,

                You wouldnt hear another word from me, my only fear is eternity,

                Without you,

                who are you.

                You can eat or you can spit,

                swallow down till your sick of it,

                feel the pain, watch the rain, lord i feel like i am insane,

                feel the joy and the ecstasy, and then you can take whatever's left of me.

                Tonight


                Another day, another time,

                maybe i will get to say goodbye,

                so take the lead, now that you are blind,

                To calm me down and give me peace of mind.

                Another mistake has befallen me,

                another safe place id rather be,

                I try to hide, but you can see.

                The real me.

                The real me.
                "Life is a run. In attack we run, in defense we run. When you can no longer run, time to die" - Shichiroji "Seven samurai"

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                • #9
                  Not bad.

                  Plato (if only the greeks hadnt all this political problems like slavery) in the republic says that poets should not be accepted in the city because that instead of contemplating the idea of goodness they are attached to the world of forms.
                  Namo Guan Yin Pusa / Dont create suffering / Dont harm animals!

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                  • #10
                    Where the **** does Plato come into all of this? Liu, you're a rip sometimes..

                    MS, you're developing talent here man. You heading towards rap or some sort of music career?
                    Experienced Community organizer. Yeah, let's choose him to run the free world. It will be historic. What could possibly go wrong...

                    "You're just a jaded cynical mother****er...." Jeffpeg

                    (more comments in my User Profile)
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                    • #11
                      Hha, no way, im nowhere near as practiced as i should be for that... Its just a pastime, something i do to make myself feel important. lol
                      "Life is a run. In attack we run, in defense we run. When you can no longer run, time to die" - Shichiroji "Seven samurai"

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                      • #12
                        I feel ya

                        I dreamed that we were in a car; someone else was driving

                        The children in the rear seat of the car in front were fighting

                        The boys inside the cars were different only in their name

                        And suddenly it hit me and I couldn’t mask my shame

                        My heart turned cold and bitter and I drowned in agony

                        As I felt the pain of both those boys bleed inside of me

                        I realized the pain they felt existed in our car,

                        We needed someone else to drive ‘cuz we had gone too far

                        A bite of sadness ate at me, as I realized

                        That we may still be fighting when the first one of us dies

                        I often look inside myself, and ask in honesty

                        If one of us would die today, what would my feelings be

                        On rare occasions do I think that I would not feel wrong

                        But for the most part I don’t think I’d stay alive that long

                        My life has been a carnival of ever changing scenes

                        And I’ve often wondered what would losing one of you two mean

                        The only constant thing that I have ever had in life

                        Would slip between my fingers and cut through me like a knife

                        I can’t replace you.

                        I can travel the planet from north to south

                        I won’t forget you

                        There’s not a goddamn thing that I can do

                        I will no longer be me if I lose you

                        But if driving together means being the slaves of our ego’s unquenchable thirst

                        Then I tell you this, brother, I hope from the depths of my soul that I die first

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                        • #13
                          Nice one dogchow=D that was deep. I didnt know that you were a writer!
                          Last edited by master splinter; 04-18-2009, 09:07 PM.
                          "Life is a run. In attack we run, in defense we run. When you can no longer run, time to die" - Shichiroji "Seven samurai"

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                          • #14
                            Femme fatale

                            You better watch those beautiful eyes boy,

                            You better watch em theyre lookin at you,

                            Oh can you see it theres a beautiful love toy,

                            I bet you didnt know what she could do.

                            YOu better watch that vicious mind kid, you're runnin all around

                            and she's playin your game,

                            You better know how to hit it right kid, she knows just the right way to say your name.

                            She wants to love me,

                            She wants to love me,

                            she wants to love me,

                            she wants to love me,



                            She wants to hold me,

                            she wants to hold me, she want to hold me she wants to hold me.

                            She wants to kill me,

                            she wants to kill me,

                            she wants to kill me,

                            she wants to kill me, she wants to kill me.
                            she wants to kill me,

                            she wants to kill me,

                            she wants to kill me,



                            Shell hang my coat on the closet rack,

                            Shell take the bathwater, turn it black,

                            If she would leave me i would want her back,

                            Can you tell me where you learned how to fight like that?

                            She wants to love me,

                            she wants to love me,

                            she wants to love me,

                            she wants to love me,

                            she wants to love me,

                            she wants to love me.

                            she wants to love me.

                            she wants to love me.
                            "Life is a run. In attack we run, in defense we run. When you can no longer run, time to die" - Shichiroji "Seven samurai"

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                            • #15
                              I write a ton. That particular one is about half a year old, and I'm working opn tagging it to some music I've composed.

                              I only bring it about when I feel it's relevant; had a feeling you'd get it.

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